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PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 7:04 am    Post subject: Menasha's Writeing  Reply with quote

A thead with things I write in it, sadly I think I lost most my writeing when I wiped my computer! I forgot to back that up, same with my photographs!
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 4:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So... is there anything you can share with us in here? Razz
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 6:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm I don't ave any writing I don't think... I uset to but it;s all gone I forgot to save it when I reformatted my computer. Have not finished any writing since.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 6:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you have any comments on creative writeing please share, I would like to get better!


A man and a women are conducting tests in space for a research mission when something went wrong with there ship. The female being the engineer went outside to see what was wrong with the ship, she would have to fix this manually.

Sadly for the man this is the last time he would see her, he still remebers watching her drift away helplessly. Her suit malfunctioned and the chord connecting her to the ship broke and she began to drift away into the void of space.

She was very worried about the man aboard the ship, she wanted to see him again, she loved him so much, she never told him how she felt, tears filled up her eye's.

She drifted for what seemed like an eternity to her somehow until she turned around and realized she was slowly moving towards a planet. This planet looked different then earth though, it looked almost alien. Feelings of anticipation and joy filled her heart.

The alien folk there rescued her and brought her into there most magnificent city. When she entered there city she saw the man she loved waiting for her there, she began to cry and ran towards him.

The man opened his arms and they held eachother for along time, to her it felt like she had just spent her whole life with him in that moment. "I was so worried about you." She told him. "I was sure I was going to die."

The man sadly shakes his head and tells her that she did.

Her dream ended there, the last part of life left in her was now gone. She slowly drifted off into the void of space, forever.


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 6:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Began writing this a few days ago, it's no where near complete, actualyl wrote some more now! But ya, these kind of things seem to be something to write for awhile then leave for a bit to gather more inspiration, then explode with creativity the next time you write! No clear ending at this point. Though I have a basic ideaof the feelings I want.

A cool summer nights wind blew agaisnt her body as she made her way to her usual spot. She would go there regularly, the view of the valley from the hill always seemed to peaceful to her. She always went there feeling like he was already there with her, waiting for her,  standing beside her sharing that one instant in time with her.

Makeing her way to the top she mused on how the wind seemed to look for the hardest path around her. For the wind would try to take advantage of her small gental body, and whisk her away from what she truly wanted.

She was a kind girl, an earnest girl, who would not back down so easily. Though I always seemed to feel a certain pain in her messages. Perhapse even more so then my own, but none the less we try our best to hold a once inseparable relationship together.

She stood at the top of the hill reining over the wind that night and sat down. The wind began to calmed down as if it accepted it could not deter her from that spot.

The sky, the moon, the stars all hung in the sky that night that there was a certain magic to it. She was unable to put it into words, she didn't feel words could exactly describe the setting.

She breathed in and out peacefully and pulled out a cell phone and wrote a short message. The sky... it's so beautiful tonight. Have you ever seen a sky like that Don? I wonder what tomorrows going to bring me. She closed the cell phone satisfied with the message.

Don was walking down a street towards a bus stop not to far from his house, he looked up and thought how wonderful the sky looked today. The sunlight seemed to dance on them with some sort of magic.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 7:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You'd really need to be careful of your spelling, I see you usually make quite a few mistakes in some of your posts.
Other than that, excellent stories. I'll try and put some up as soon as possible. Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The inspiration I've been waiting for, finally came today! I really wanted to write a story "ideally with illustrations if I have time" for white day for her! But I had no idea what to write about since I wanted it to related to her someone, her gift related to me, I should do the same!

So talking to her today she sent me this message which is enclosed below. Which I feel I can use as a base for a short story. It's going to be a simple story of a girl about age 15 going for a summer bike ride.

She notices a very green grassy park area with a nice stone wall to sit down by. (This is a place not to far from my house and a few weeks ago I thought (That's a place someone who go to look up at the sky.)

Looking up at the sky, it reminds her of an old friend of her's and she begins to look threw her text message history.

It ends with her museing over how these human drama's can reapeat them selfs a trillion times over and will never change. The story is always the same, the only difference is the individual writing it.

The feelings I want to show in this is a particular character who would rather do what right, even if it hurts them. There the most honest/earnest of people in my mind.

One example would be the male lead in Place Promised =)

Something weird happened today. But first, some background information you need to know. There's this guy named Robert that I had fallen in love with at the beginning of year, but he had a girlfriend (that was also sort of a friend of mine) who's in college. With her away in college, he and I got pretty close, but I, out of a surge of moral realization, pushed him away by telling him not to flirt with me anymore. It was such a strange feeling. Completely backwards and inside out from what you want.



Well, it's been a few months now, and we're barely friends now, more like acquaintances. It really bothered me at first, but I "got over him", I guess. Being around him still made me nervous, though. His girlfriend, my friend, angrily broke up with him a few weeks ago. I think things started going down hill for them since I came into the picture. She probably finally got fed up with his promiscuous nature.


After that, he indirectly asked me out by saying he needed to go on a "de-Ashley-fying date", (her name was Ashley), and looking at me while he said it.

That was another strange feeling. I really didn't feel like going out with him. That might have all I wanted several months ago, but now it would feel like going backwards emotionally. I had already been through that heart ache, and now I was somewhere down another path towards a different destination. It felt like a dream for a fleeting moment, but that was all.

Once, while I was still wrapped around Robert's finger, he told me this sob story about why he stopped taking drugs and how his friend died and crap and tears welled up in his eyes and I was so captured by it all that I cried we sat there in each other's arms like fools.

Then he kind of kissed me lightly and went home. I found out today that he had never taken drugs in his life. He let it slip in front of me accidentally when my friend said she knew a lot about his life, and he responded that she "didn't know that he'd never taken drugs in his life".

It took several seconds for that to sink in. I asked him if he's lied to me, and just said yes. My friend was upset, too--she'd know him for three years. It was a stupid thing for him to say, given that he had lied to both of us and he said it so abruptly.

I walked away disgusted, pulling my friend along with me. She kept looking back, but I had a steel grip around her shoulders. I don't think I'll even sit at the same lunch table that he does, whether my friend does or not, which she probably will. I don't forgive as easily as she does.


I don't know wether his friend really died or not, but I really don't care. The fact that he could sit there and lie to me and let me cry about it and then take the opportunity to kiss me afterwards is disgusting. I really should have seen through him. A friend of mine always said that everything that came out of Robert's mouth was BS, but I never quite believed her. She's definitely wiser that I am, and a class younger.
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yikes ... people that can lie like that are bad news.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 3:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mmmmhmmm hard to tell sometimes. This morning I relised I was going to be late for my bus since I got out of the shower 4 min before my bus came, but I also have a spare in morning first. So I'm going to go take these two pictures now.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 12:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Something with my personality I've noticed a while back. When I tell lies, most people will usually believe me but when I tell the truth, they would think I'm lying.

This vice versa gets pretty interesting sometimes with the situations I get in, so I take advantage of it both ways knowing what people can believe. Ya I'm evil. Twisted Evil

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